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1 Story writing with Roald Dahl
1.1 Setting the scene
1 Nouns: mountain, butterfly, book, office,
rabbit, shirt, rain, computer.
Adjectives: interesting, beautiful, young, happy,
clever, sharp, blue.
2 Learners’ own setting ideas with appropriate
nouns and adjectives.
3 Learners’ own pictures with appropriate nouns
and adjectives labelling the picture.
1.2 Looking at a setting
1 Following words circled: bricks, roof, chimney,
windows, window, sheet, newspaper, upstairs,
place, path, wilderness, nettles, thorns, grass
2 Old, crumbly, pale, red, slate, one, small, two,
little, front, larger, side, long, brown
3 human d w elling a wild area
slate to hold something
closely
wilderness very big, huge
embracing a grey rock used to
make a roof
enormous a place where people
live
1.3 Building a picture with words
1 Learners’ answers could include:
house: mouse, louse, douse
round: pound, sound, found
would: could, should
mouth: south
loud: proud, cloud
3 Learners’ answers could include:
I should tie my shoelaces before I trip up.
We would like to play football after school.
Could I borrow your ruler please?
Please can I go out with my friends?
You look very happy.
What is your name?
1.4 Writing a setting
1 Possible answers:
Same: there is a shopping centre; both have
cars; both have people.
Different: in one picture (A) it is sunny and in
the other picture it is not (B); there are lots of
people in Picture A but not in Picture B; one
car has a window open in Picture A but not
in Picture B; there is an umbrella in Picture B
but not in Picture A.
2 Possible adjectives for Picture A: hot, sunny,
busy, warm, happy
Possible adjectives for Picture B: cold, wet,
gloomy, dull, cloudy.
3 Possible answers:
Picture A
It is a sunny day. The sky is blue so everyone
feels happy. Some people are arriving. They are
feeling cheerful as they walk towards the mall.
Others have spent a busy time in the shops.
They look tired as they walk back to their cars.
Picture B
It is a gloomy day. There is a thunder storm.
The sky is grey so everyone feels miserable.
The people who are arriving are feeling cross as
they walk towards the mall. Other people are
leaving. They look unhappy as they hurry back
to their cars.
2
When ou sounds like
the oo in stood
When ou sounds like
the ou in mouse
When ou sounds like
the oo in too
When ou sounds like
the ow in cow
would house through our
could shout you hour
should about cloud
out count
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1 Story writing with Roald Dahl
1.1 Setting the scene
1 Nouns: mountain, butterfly, book, office,
rabbit, shirt, rain, computer.
Adjectives: interesting, beautiful, young, happy,
clever, sharp, blue.
2 Learners’ own setting ideas with appropriate
nouns and adjectives.
3 Learners’ own pictures with appropriate nouns
and adjectives labelling the picture.
1.2 Looking at a setting
1 Following words circled: bricks, roof, chimney,
windows, window, sheet, newspaper, upstairs,
place, path, wilderness, nettles, thorns, grass
2 Old, crumbly, pale, red, slate, one, small, two,
little, front, larger, side, long, brown
3 human d w elling a wild area
slate to hold something
closely
wilderness very big, huge
embracing a grey rock used to
make a roof
enormous a place where people
live
1.3 Building a picture with words
1 Learners’ answers could include:
house: mouse, louse, douse
round: pound, sound, found
would: could, should
mouth: south
loud: proud, cloud
3 Learners’ answers could include:
I should tie my shoelaces before I trip up.
We would like to play football after school.
Could I borrow your ruler please?
Please can I go out with my friends?
You look very happy.
What is your name?
1.4 Writing a setting
1 Possible answers:
Same: there is a shopping centre; both have
cars; both have people.
Different: in one picture (A) it is sunny and in
the other picture it is not (B); there are lots of
people in Picture A but not in Picture B; one
car has a window open in Picture A but not
in Picture B; there is an umbrella in Picture B
but not in Picture A.
2 Possible adjectives for Picture A: hot, sunny,
busy, warm, happy
Possible adjectives for Picture B: cold, wet,
gloomy, dull, cloudy.
3 Possible answers:
Picture A
It is a sunny day. The sky is blue so everyone
feels happy. Some people are arriving. They are
feeling cheerful as they walk towards the mall.
Others have spent a busy time in the shops.
They look tired as they walk back to their cars.
Picture B
It is a gloomy day. There is a thunder storm.
The sky is grey so everyone feels miserable.
The people who are arriving are feeling cross as
they walk towards the mall. Other people are
leaving. They look unhappy as they hurry back
to their cars.
2
When ou sounds like
the oo in stood
When ou sounds like
the ou in mouse
When ou sounds like
the oo in too
When ou sounds like
the ow in cow
would house through our
could shout you hour
should about cloud
out count
2
4 Possible answers:
1 beautiful 2 cheerful
3 sandy 4 joyful
5 warm 6 delicious
7 thrilled 8 wonderful
1.5 Looking at characters
1 Learners’ own answers. Learners should use
adjectives to describe the colour of the boy’s
clothes, adjectives to describe his hair, face and
eyes beyond simple colour. Do they describe
how he stands or what he might be thinking?
2 Learners’ character descriptions should include
some of their adjectives from Activity 1. Some
learners may only include information about
appearance. Other learners should include
information about what their character does.
A few learners may include how the character
feels or what he says.
3 friendly enthusiastic
happy occupied
kind delighted
busy welcoming
interested considerate
excited engrossed
1.6 What happens next?
1
Words that mean
enormous
Words that mean
the opposite of
enormous
big small
huge tiny
gigantic little
2 Possible answers:
Words that mean
brave
Words that mean
the opposite of
brave
bold cowardly
courageous timid
fearless cautious
heroic fearful
Words that mean
brave
Words that mean
the opposite of
brave
daring scared
adventurous faint-hearted
3 Learners’ own definitions, but examples might be:
crocodile: a large, scaly reptile with short
legs and large strong jaws
lunch: a meal eaten in the middle of
the day
sharp: a very fine point, sometimes at
the end of a knife, needle or
pencil
gulp: to swallow something quickly
bitter: have an unpleasant taste; the
opposite of sweet
greedy: wanting to eat more and more
food
jungle: a tropical forest with lots of trees
and leaves
secret: something that no one else knows
1.7 Looking at verbs
1 a A verb can be called a doing, being or
having word.
b A sentence must have a verb in it.
c If something has already happened the verb
is written in the past tense.
d If something is happening now the verb is
written in the present tense.
e The most common verb in the English
language is the verb to be.
2 a He had a cup of chai after school. past
b The phone rings all day long. present
c We are all here today. present
d The baby owls learned to fly. past
e Hida y a picked her friends for her
cricket team. past
f The tree outside my window grows
very fast. present
3 The words in bold should have been circled in
each triangle.
am ant any
arm are at
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1 Story writing with Roald Dahl
1.1 Setting the scene
1 Nouns: mountain, butterfly, book, office,
rabbit, shirt, rain, computer.
Adjectives: interesting, beautiful, young, happy,
clever, sharp, blue.
2 Learners’ own setting ideas with appropriate
nouns and adjectives.
3 Learners’ own pictures with appropriate nouns
and adjectives labelling the picture.
1.2 Looking at a setting
1 Following words circled: bricks, roof, chimney,
windows, window, sheet, newspaper, upstairs,
place, path, wilderness, nettles, thorns, grass
2 Old, crumbly, pale, red, slate, one, small, two,
little, front, larger, side, long, brown
3 human d w elling a wild area
slate to hold something
closely
wilderness very big, huge
embracing a grey rock used to
make a roof
enormous a place where people
live
1.3 Building a picture with words
1 Learners’ answers could include:
house: mouse, louse, douse
round: pound, sound, found
would: could, should
mouth: south
loud: proud, cloud
3 Learners’ answers could include:
I should tie my shoelaces before I trip up.
We would like to play football after school.
Could I borrow your ruler please?
Please can I go out with my friends?
You look very happy.
What is your name?
1.4 Writing a setting
1 Possible answers:
Same: there is a shopping centre; both have
cars; both have people.
Different: in one picture (A) it is sunny and in
the other picture it is not (B); there are lots of
people in Picture A but not in Picture B; one
car has a window open in Picture A but not
in Picture B; there is an umbrella in Picture B
but not in Picture A.
2 Possible adjectives for Picture A: hot, sunny,
busy, warm, happy
Possible adjectives for Picture B: cold, wet,
gloomy, dull, cloudy.
3 Possible answers:
Picture A
It is a sunny day. The sky is blue so everyone
feels happy. Some people are arriving. They are
feeling cheerful as they walk towards the mall.
Others have spent a busy time in the shops.
They look tired as they walk back to their cars.
Picture B
It is a gloomy day. There is a thunder storm.
The sky is grey so everyone feels miserable.
The people who are arriving are feeling cross as
they walk towards the mall. Other people are
leaving. They look unhappy as they hurry back
to their cars.
2
When ou sounds like
the oo in stood
When ou sounds like
the ou in mouse
When ou sounds like
the oo in too
When ou sounds like
the ow in cow
would house through our
could shout you hour
should about cloud
out count
2
4 Possible answers:
1 beautiful 2 cheerful
3 sandy 4 joyful
5 warm 6 delicious
7 thrilled 8 wonderful
1.5 Looking at characters
1 Learners’ own answers. Learners should use
adjectives to describe the colour of the boy’s
clothes, adjectives to describe his hair, face and
eyes beyond simple colour. Do they describe
how he stands or what he might be thinking?
2 Learners’ character descriptions should include
some of their adjectives from Activity 1. Some
learners may only include information about
appearance. Other learners should include
information about what their character does.
A few learners may include how the character
feels or what he says.
3 friendly enthusiastic
happy occupied
kind delighted
busy welcoming
interested considerate
excited engrossed
1.6 What happens next?
1
Words that mean
enormous
Words that mean
the opposite of
enormous
big small
huge tiny
gigantic little
2 Possible answers:
Words that mean
brave
Words that mean
the opposite of
brave
bold cowardly
courageous timid
fearless cautious
heroic fearful
Words that mean
brave
Words that mean
the opposite of
brave
daring scared
adventurous faint-hearted
3 Learners’ own definitions, but examples might be:
crocodile: a large, scaly reptile with short
legs and large strong jaws
lunch: a meal eaten in the middle of
the day
sharp: a very fine point, sometimes at
the end of a knife, needle or
pencil
gulp: to swallow something quickly
bitter: have an unpleasant taste; the
opposite of sweet
greedy: wanting to eat more and more
food
jungle: a tropical forest with lots of trees
and leaves
secret: something that no one else knows
1.7 Looking at verbs
1 a A verb can be called a doing, being or
having word.
b A sentence must have a verb in it.
c If something has already happened the verb
is written in the past tense.
d If something is happening now the verb is
written in the present tense.
e The most common verb in the English
language is the verb to be.
2 a He had a cup of chai after school. past
b The phone rings all day long. present
c We are all here today. present
d The baby owls learned to fly. past
e Hida y a picked her friends for her
cricket team. past
f The tree outside my window grows
very fast. present
3 The words in bold should have been circled in
each triangle.
am ant any
arm are at
3
be bee bed
where were warm
wash was want
was win with
in is it
art all are
went want was
1.8 Speech in texts
1 a Words that Miho said: Where are you
going?; Where have you been?; I have been
so worried; Nothing is that important; Boys
should do what their mother tells them to
do; Y ou are a good boy!
d Words that Yuu said: I’ll be back later,
mother; I’m sorry; I had forgotten
to do something important, but then
I remembered it; But this was very
important!; I had forgotten to get your
present. But then I remembered. Look!
2 shrieked, shouted, demanded, mumbled,
complained, declared, stated
3 Learners’ own answers.
1.9 Sequencing events
Encourage learners to select a story they have read
recently or know very well.
1 Learners’ own answers. Remind learners that
they are not to write the whole story; they
should only write a one or two sentences for
each of the six points on the story mountain.
2 Learners’ own answers.
3 Learners’ own answers.
1.10 Planning a story
Learners’ own answers.
1.11 Writing a story
1 Marco loved riding his bike but he was getting
too big for it. He needed a new bike but he
knew his papa didn’t have enough money. One
day he saw a notice for a bike race. The prize
was a new bike. Marco wanted that new bike
but first he would have to win the race on his
little bike.
2
Word
Difficult
bit
Word
Similar
word
Similar
word
was wa was want
wand,
watch
said ai said again
rain,
afraid,
stain
there ere there where were
3 Learners’ own answers.
1.12 Improving your story
1 Learners’ own answers.
2 Learners’ own answers but possible dialogue
might be:
Girl: I wonder what it could be?
Boy: I hope it’s something we can play with
together.
3 ‘Where are we going?’ asked Anja.
‘Shall we going back to my house to make
some sweets?’ Jonah replied.
Jonah had just remembered it was his
grandmother’s birthday the next day. He
wanted to make something for her.
‘What a great idea,’ laughed Anja. ‘I could
make some sweets for my brother too. It was
his birthday next last week.’
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